Some notes. Your range is stellar as usual and you have a decent number of characters here. However, I did have some problems with it. Many of the scenes, there wasn't a whole lot of character behind them. Like, the voice was there, but there weren't many times when I said to myself "This is a defined character." I would recommend taking out some of the multi-character scenes and focus more on building one character per scene in order to show off your acting ability as well as your range. I know you can act. I've seen it. I also know that you have a wonderful range. You just need to find a happy medium between the two with this demo. Also for many of the scenes, the music was WAY too loud and overpowered the voices. To me this feels like the rough draft of a voice demo, especially after what I've seen you do in the past. I know you can do it. Show me the monkey and unleash the beast, my friend. Just some notes for you to keep in mind.
Well mixed. Well acted. Hilariously funny. Good job.
Clear and Varied
You have quite the range. The sound effects and music fit everything and your really showed off your vocal chops. I was actually quite suprised by the amount of voices that you were able to put into here without making it seem rushed. It was the perfect length for a demo and showed off your skills.
I've heard of this song I've heard. I like how it wasn't all guitar. there was more to it. you dont see good video game remixes like this every day.
Thanks dude. I tried to vary it as much as I could without just using straight up synthesizers or a tuba.
Get me a mop
Quit making me cream, gawddammit
This is one of my favorite remixes
and it isnt even done D:.
Will there ever be a full version?
Mother of god
what have you done
I'll animate it
It made me lol
I knew i shouldnt have listened to this...
...before i took a sip of coke. You made soda come out my nose you fatkidwithafannypck >:(
In terms of acting: 9/10 (i dont give perfect scores. it was damn good.)
In terms of varaity: 8/10 (It was good, but the two voices were kind of similar at times. not a whole lot, but it happened)
Originality: 9/10 (Funny ass jokes. Funny story. lack of sandwich jokes :\...jk again i dont give perfect scores)
Good work. We need to do something together sometime
Thank you. I knew i didnt do that good with acting, but thats because I was a lot more laid back in my acting lol. I agree completley that the two voices were the same at times. Thanks for your honest opinions :)
Those voices were incredible and the whole thing was pretty lolfull ^_^
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